A close whisper
Breath on my ear, pounding hearts
Loud I could hear.
Jingle, was quite generous to have put my first Senyru, up on his blog. And she did put her skills onto Senyru too; the output of which was quite interesting. I recommend you to check it out here. Her post inspired me to write the above. I hope you enjoyed it.
Shivering in winter
On cold ice, barefoot I met her;
A look! Thus began summer.
So that was my first attempt at Senyru. I was quite impressed with this form of poetry, when I came across it in Poems to the Ocean (Adam’s blog). Read through a few of his posts, and I couldn’t wait to give it a shot. Pardon me, if its not in the correct structure. I would love to hear what you think on the same. Thanks!