Close Whisper

A close whisper

Breath on my ear, pounding hearts

Loud I could hear.



Jingle, was quite generous to have put my first Senyru, up on his blog.Β And she did put her skills onto Senyru too; the output of which was quite interesting. I recommend you to check it out here. Her post inspired me to write the above. I hope you enjoyed it.


38 thoughts on “Close Whisper

  1. I love the simplicity of this, it’s clean and indeed very crystal clear. πŸ™‚
    Thank you for stopping by my blog, and your comment.
    I appreciate it.
    Have a lovely week. πŸ™‚

    • simplicity is what i like. thanks for the appreciation! Ana you are doing a fantastic job on your blog! I will be visiting for more! πŸ™‚
      warm wishes

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  5. AAhhhhh!!! im touched. deep inside..
    the picture is so perfect.
    the words so beautiful..
    The feeling is so deep..

    i am amazed..

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